Thursday, May 17, 2012

The Candle Crown, Chapter One


“So, just like that, the…”
            “What?”
            David’s head turned like a dog, pointed itself at an open alley. The alley in question was dark. The pavement at the bottom was appropriately slick with water, although from rain or mist it was unclear. It wasn’t a particularly misty or rainy day. Just one of those mysteries, Neil had long since decided.

So there was David and Neil, out at night in the Downtown. On the street they stood upon were primarily antique shops, but also privately owned restaurants and thrift stores. David and Neil had never been inside any of them. David primarily liked Downtown because it was far away from home, and Neil liked Downtown because he thought it looked nice. Neil also occasionally imagined he was a detective of the sort found in serials from the 20’s and 30’s, and that whenever they were Downtown it was a Night Off The Job, or an opportunity to relax. Neil hadn’t voiced this dream since he’d been seven, but that hadn’t diminished his dreams or aspirations, and so they were, as Neil stood, at age sixteen.
            And at the moment, David was pointed like a Setter at the alleyway before them, where there issued a pair of voices, held in a constant conversation, one never giving way to the other. Neither David nor Neil could properly understand either of the voices, and since David cared to overhear, he stepped closer.
            “What?” Neil asked. He’d refused to move from the wall they had chosen to lean against while David had told his story.
            “You hear them,” David said, “It sounds like some villains.”
            “Villains?” Neil asked. For a moment he forgot how silly the word sounded. He was Dowtown. Downtown is where detectives could find ample supplies of villains.
            “One of them has the roughest voice I’ve ever…,” David said, trailing off, both in his voice and in the way he started walking towards the alleyway. Neil followed after a moment unsure of whether or not he actually wanted to go forth and uncover what it was David was after.
            Neil could hear the voices clearer as he stepped after David, keeping one foot ahead of the other at all times. His legs were tense, as he figured he’d need to break off and make a run for it at any moment. Detectives did that.
            “Candle Crown?”
            Neil looked at David, even though it hadn’t been David that’d said it. It’d been one of the voices ahead. David looked back at Neil, “The fucking Candle Crown,” this spoken in a whisper.
            “The Candle Crown?” Neil whispered back. It stirred memories. Ghost stories told at campfires. Going into bathrooms and turning off the lights and chanting incantations intended to rouse the spirits of the dead. Those kinds of memories.
            “The Candle Crown,” the second voice affirmed, “The Mason’s son found it, if you’d believe it. Found it in, uh, the tunnel by Gebirr bridge. You know the one?” This one wasn’t the one with the rough voice. This villain’s voice was tinted with the accent of the region, which is to say, an accent between Boston’s and New York’s, even though Falling Rocks was at least two hundred miles away from either city, at the closest.
            “Yeah,” the other said. And his was a voice that sounded like gravel, or more accurately, like a voice that’d been used to smoking cigarettes in quantities that were supposed to kill most living things.
            David turned around with a raised eyebrow, his mouth open as though to make an announcement, but then the other villain replied, “The Mason’s son says that only Jamie is to look after it. Something about Ember Horrors. I don’t quite get it. Jamie always seemed like a normal kind of guy. What does he know about Ember Horrors that I don’t?”
            “Jamie’s fuck-deep in Ember Terrors,” Mr. Coalchest said, as though the statement were normal.
            “Isn’t he though?”
            David turned, “Sounds like a couple of goons,” he said.
            Neil knew that David knew all about which words would get Neil interested in things. David even knew exactly which words would make Neil not be afraid of things Neil was typically afraid of.
As David crushed his cigarette under his shoe, he added, “We need to get closer.”
“Need?” Neil asked, “Need’s a pretty strong word for the situation here. I think we certainly can get closer.”
David already did get closer, but Neil hung back. His phone chimed once, and David looked back in horror before diving behind a dumpster with a noise that was at least three times as many decibels as Neil’s phone had produced. Neil didn’t wait to see what the two goons ahead would do. Goons would do what goons did.
Neil took off, knowing exactly the quickest route out of Downtown. Up North Street, down that street that he used to go whenever he wanted to play with that one kid (what was her name?), between two buildings that looked abandoned but were in fact un-abandoned, and then up the road to the Supermarket, where Neil could lay low.
At least, those were thoughts that Neil had as he’d started to run. Neurotransmitters and hormones shot through his body like potentially lethal drugs, which they were, and his mind flooded with the instant need to get away, a need that isn’t conductive to planned escaping.
He certainly made it onto North Street alright. North Street is particularly well lit. Neil even considered stopping there to see if the goons would even bother to try to grab him there. After all, they’d sounded like they were much older than Neil. Too old to be playing catch with teenagers.
But Neil thought back to David, alone in the alley by the dumpster, and a different set of emotions rushed through his head. Ones that rhyme with lame and begin with the letter S. He was steeling himself to return to the alley when a man wearing a leather jacket and tight black jeans rounded the corner.
This man undoubtedly dressed like a mobster, and visually, fit the goon ideal to perfection. He even had a concentrated look of loathing etched on his face that perfectly embodied his intentions, or at least embodied the intentions the animal sections of Neil’s brain were screaming at Neil to avoid. Neil noted the absence of the second goon, and his heart dropped. And he hung there in the road for a moment, staring, expecting the slick goon ahead of him to stop running, or to at least slow. But the slick goon must have chased people before, and had anticipated Neil’s next move.
Which, obviously, was to run the other way
At the speed the goon kept up with Neil, Neil knew for certain he hadn’t been the goon who’d had the raspy voice. This goon was simply too fast. Neil kept his pace, quickening it every other second, as he flew down that street where he used to go whenever he wanted to play with that one kid. Neil began to consider the thought of being captured, and his run quickly turned into the fullest sprint Neil had ever experienced. It was the sprint that had been absent on the hundred meter dash last year.
As Neil slipped between the two beaten down houses, both of which had likely been constructed before the turn of the 19th century, Neil looked over his shoulder and slowed, and saw that the slick haired thug was further behind, but had not stopped. The same look remained on the goon’s face.
Neil kept running. The supermarket was ahead. If he could get inside, he’d be in a public place at least. The goon could come after him in there, but Neil would be safe. Neil could call his parents or something. It’d be lame, but he’d be safe.
The road up towards the supermarket was old and riddled with cracks. And additionally, it was uphill to the supermarket. Neil honestly didn’t notice the cracks at all. He was more concerned with the potential murderer behind him, who may or may not have pulled out a knife from his leather jacket, than with flaws in urban development that had been mentioned repeatedly at town hall meetings but ignored, year after year.
At the top of the hill, the final of the cracks found the toe of Neil’s shoe helplessly trapped inside. The crack gave way, busted open, almost shouting, “You’re free, Neil! Escape is so close you can almost taste it!”
But Neil had never been very good at ballet, sports, or regaining his balance after tripping. Instead of tasting escape, Neil tasted blood as he pitched forward into the ground.
Thankfully, there was no ringing noise. Neil had always hated the ringing noise in movies or games that came after someone suffered a head injury.
Neil slowly propped himself up on his arms, and turned his head.

David had hidden from the very beginning, of course. Both of the goons had left the alley in pursuit of Neil who, while not being the one who had given away their location, had been the only one the goons had seen. David had chosen to creep out and escape while the thugs pursued Neil.
David had seen the goon wearing the leather jacket, but had also seen the second goon, the one with the rusty voice. The rusty voiced goon was much shorter, and was wearing only a black t-shirt with the tour dates of a metal band on the back of it along with a pair of dirty blue jeans.
The metal fan veered left, when the man wearing the leather jacket veered right. It was obvious to anyone spectating that the metal fan was to somehow cut off Neil, should Neil head in the direction that the metal fan was heading.
David wanted to give Neil every chance he could get.
David kept on his person at all times a switchblade he’d inherited from his grandfather. He pulled this out as he pursued the metal fan, not entirely sure of what he’d do once he caught up with the goon. The fast goon had soon vanished, but the second goon took his sweet time in going wherever it was that he’d chosen to go. David didn’t know exactly where Neil had gone, but he was pretty sure the metal fan was headed in the wrong direction.
This is because the metal fan was headed for the bridge, and Neil’s house lay on the side of the river that David and the metal goon was currently on. David kept on him for a time, clutching the switchblade in his jeans pocket. They passed several houses with the lights still on inside, not at all uncommon on a late Saturday night. David had decided his pocket was a safer place to keep his weapon
The goon walked onto a staircase that ran parallel to the bridge and ascended to street level, where he continued to walk, heading across the river. It was at this time that David decided he’d better double back. This whole exchange, while pleasant and calm, took exactly the same amount of time it took the leather jacket wearing goon to finally catch up to Neil.
Neil had recently face planted in the worn concrete of a well rode road.
Remember?
As Neil turned his head, he saw that there was indeed a knife in the thug’s hand. Neil also saw that there weren’t many houses on the hill he’d chosen to run up. In fact, it was just forest on either side. When Neil felt the grip of the thug’s hand on his shirt collar, Neil twisted to try to free himself, started to yell. “Quiet,” the man barked, and with a tug, pulled Neil aside into the brush. As Neil watched the street fade away behind branches and leaves, he had the thought that perhaps it’d been a bad idea to run up a hill with such a well secluded spot nearby.
It may have been a good idea, had Neil been further ahead. And had he not tripped over a crack in the pavement. Maybe.
“What were you doing?” The thug asked.
Neil, being dragged over rocks and roots, didn’t much care to reply. He was in an uncomfortable enough situation, with holes being torn in his shirt and the skin of his back, that forming words, let alone sentences, was beyond his current capabilities.
He did manage to grunt, but a hefty smack to the back of his head convinced him that further attempts at making noise would warrant further aggression. Indeed, the thug carried a knife. It was not unreasonable of Neil to expect that there was much further aggression that the thug might very well be capable of.
When they stopped moving, Neil twisted again, arching his back and kicking. To his surprise, the man let go. Neil flailed for a moment, unrestrained, and attempted to stand. The world spun around him as this occurred; he hadn’t expected the man to let go and so Neil’s kicking had been quite forceful. Neil lost his balance and fell onto his side, but immediately started to stand. The jacketed goon was before him, and immediately forced Neil down to the dirt, holding the knife to his throat. “Again,” the thug said, “What were you doing?”
“Nothing,” Neil said.
“Didn’t look like it,” the thug said, “The way you got to running it seemed kind of like you were up to something. People who run are usually afraid of retribution for what they’ve acted.”
“For… What?”
“Don’t what me, kid, you’re just cutting down your thin thread of life when you what me. Who sent ya? The Scanners? How about the Greys?” At this, the thug pressed the knife in just a little deeper, just enough to draw blood. “The Greys have something they want found out?”
“Greys, like, the aliens?”
The thug punched him in the side of his head, and pain unlike Neil had faced since breaking his arm flooded his face.
“I don’t know what you’re talking about!” Neil shouted, “I wasn’t sent by anyone, I’m just a kid.”
“Just a fucking kid, huh?” The thug drew back his hand to throw another punch, but stopped himself, “I mean, really? They think I wouldn’t kill a kid?
“I don’t know, I mean,” Neil was left without a propensity for coherent sentences, this time out of terror, “Just.”
“Just what?” The thug asked.
“Just don’t kill me; I swear I won’t tell anyone about the stupid Candle Clown.”
Crown,” the thug said.
“What?”
“It’s the Candle Crown, not the Candle Clown. That’s absurd. Who gives two shits about a Candle Clown?”
“I don’t know,” Neil said.
“You’re a pretty dumb spy,” the thug said. He smirked. “You know, as a Bricklayer, I’m insulted. Maybe you should run off and tell them how insulted we are. I mean, after all, what did you hear that was so important? Candle Clown?”
“Yeah,” Neil said, “And plus, I’m still not a spy. That never started happening since we began this conversation.”
“Wiseass,” the thug said. His grin vanished. He drew back his knife, tensed, and stopped.
All Neil heard was a rustling in the bushes. But the thug looked up and saw a pair of teeth, sharp, glinting in the dark. In other words, a threat; even though the teeth were sitting snug inside of a wide smile.
And then the thug stood, backed away, and vanished. Neil wasn’t even sure how someone could run away from something so fast. Neil couldn’t have done it if he tried. Of course, when Neil turned to look, he didn’t see any teeth, let alone any threat.
She hadn’t saved Neil’s life for Neil. She’d done it because she’d been following that thug, and she’d been told she was supposed to make him get scared. Get him to run off somewhere safe. Get him to run back home. She was supposed to follow.
Neil didn’t know any of that of course. He just felt at the cut on his neck and stood slowly, looking around in the woods to try to see what the thug had seen. He wanted to figure out what the big deal had been. And then Neil felt all the adrenaline leaving his system, and he wanted nothing else than to go home.
His phone buzzed again, and rang once. Another text message. He flipped it open, and saw:

Neil???

And then he scrolled up to read the first message, the one that had started it all.


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