My Update? 0:,'

I am presently working on the REAL start to my Urban Survival story... not that anyone really cares i just felt like i would post something to show i havent forgotten about this place! :D

So I will end up posting the real first two chapters of Urban Survival at some point hopefully. it will deal a whole lot with actually developing the main character Max and hopefully go more in depth into the plot of the story... so hopefully clearing up any questions about it because it sure did start in a funny place at first... without a real plot! :O no worries the plot has been thunk to its most thoughtful place that my mind could think!

And so it shall be... you know... hopefully... written... at some point...

:D

minor update

A Tepid Crossing ch. 7 should be up tomorrow or tuesday or wednesday. If it doesn't happen any of these three days, something terrible has happened and you should notify the authorities.

(not really you guys)

edit: so just because i want to build up a little bit of a buffer, part 7 goes up friday night no questions asked. if i can, part 8 will go up on friday. so on and so forth from there unto infinity.

edit edit: so ch. 7 needs some heavy editing. it is in no condition to be uploaded after the first read through. but i AM working on it, so i hope that makes you feel better about being alive.

JOUSE--randump

THIS is the text aBOVE

The Odds are Against It...

The sky was dark, blanketed by the gathered vapor. The pressure had given way and you feel the first heavy drop on your head. You didn't hear the thunder over the buds muting your ears, but the droplets made you look up. You smile and close your eyes, removing your hood; the pressure lifting from you as if mirroring the dropping sky. There is a flash and you see the first lighting strike. This time you hear the thunder a few beats later. After seeing the lightning you begin to run, you're not sure why, but it makes you feel free, so you begin to run faster. Another strike, this time a low roar quickly following, almost in time with the music in your ears. After reaching the top of a hill you decide to rest, taking a few seconds to feel the pouring rain. Your heart is beating in time with the music and you have a sudden rush, you can feel the crescendo building and a pressure in yourself ready to be released. You almost feel as though you are flying. Another flash, but this time there is no delay before the tremendous crack. The music has stopped and your heart stops keeping time; stopping completely. Your body becomes limp and collapses on itself in the wet grass. Your eyes stare blankly, unmoving, motionless, and still; your consciousness not yet gone, but not in place. You watch your numb body as it lies still. Still since the instant the bright light hit you. In the same instant, death took you.

You feel the pressure begin to return, a silent crescendo builds and once again you feel as though you are flying. You are ready to soar.

One final flash strikes, silhouetting the hill's lonesome tree, and the pressure is gone.

Suddenly you hear music playing, quietly, but clear. A solid beat. Your tingling toes and fingers keep beat. You turn your head towards the sky as it divides to reveal the sun.

And you can't help but smile.

What If I Told You?

What if I told you
That you are the one
For me
For me
You are the
What if I told you
We could take a second breath
Second breath.
What if I told you
We had something
It's real, it's true
It's not in my head
And I thought that we
Could be
Forever...

Where are you now,
Where are you now,
I need you.
What if I tried,
What if I died,
To be with you.

Where are you,
I need you,
Please come back home!
You are the
Only one
I ever knew!

----instrumental----

What if I told you
I would give it all
to you,
to you,
I'd give it.
What if i told you
I would catch a star'
All for you!
What if I told you
That I love you
What if I told you
That I need you
I need you

Where are you now,
Where are you now,
I need you.
What if I tried,
What if I died,
To be with you.

Where are you,
I need you,
Please come back home!
I need you
You are my
Only hope

----bridge----

What if I said
That i needed you more
Than Anything,
Anything,
Anything,
In the world, and
What if I said
We could be together
Forever and,
Ever,
Ever,
Until the end

Where are you now,
Where are you now,
I need you.
What if I tried,
What if I died,
To be with you.

Where are you,
I need you,
Please come back home!
You are the
Only one
I ever knew!

What if I said
That i needed you more
Than Anything,
Anything,
Anything,
In the world, and
What if I said
We could be together
Forever and,
Ever,
Ever,
Until the end and,

What would you
Say to me?
What would you
Think of me?

----end----

shithy storhy

Alfred was a dude with a tuxedo. He was a cool dude and didn't afraid of anything. One morning he was fixing himself a meal and he happened to see some pure rabblerousers outside, dancing and causing trouble for his neighbors. Alfred decided it was time to do something with his life, so he fetched his doublebarreled shotgun and stepped out to deal with them.

(I apologize for what follows. It was a vain attempt to write 750 words in under an hour...)

What if I Told You?

What if I told you
That you are the one
For me
For me
You are the
What if I told you
We could take a second breath
Second breath.
What if I told you
We had something
It's real, it's true
It's not in my head
And I thought that we
Could be
Forever...

Where are you now,
Where are you now,
I need you.
What if I tried,
What if I died,
To be with you.

Where are you,
I need you,
Please come back home!
You are the
Only one
I ever knew!

What if I said
That i needed you more
Than Anything,
Anything,
Anything,
In the world, and
What if I said
We could be together
Forever and,
Ever,
Ever,
Until the end and,

What would you
Say to me?
What would you
Think of me?

Where are you now,
Where are you now,
I need you.
What if I tried,
What if I died,
To be with you.

Where are you,
I need you,
Please come back home!
I need you,
You are my
Only hope!

----bridge/solo----

What if I told you
I would give it all
to you,
to you,
I'd give it.
What if i told you
I would catch a star'
All for you!
What if I told you
That I love you
What if I told you
That I need you!

........................?

(Song i've been writing. I've gotten all the music and solo and whatnot, all i need is an outro.... like i said im working on it.)